Friday 16 May 2014

My special place


I was learning how to use my senses to add detail to my writing so that I can make my writing more interesting  for my readers.
I was proud of my writing because I put lots of detail into it.The part that was tricky for me was what could we smell because it was hard to find the right words.
My next step is to use my skills in my other writing to add detail.

Tuesday 13 May 2014

Finding and Summarising Information in a Non-Fiction Test

I have been learning to find and summarise information in a non-fiction text.  I read a book about butterflies and learnt some facts.  I used the information I found to do a comparison with Eliani who learnt about bees.  Here is our Venn Diagram: